IF YOU COULD CHANGE ONE THING ABOUT OUR SCHOOL WHAT WOULD IT BE?

This Term Rm 11 was given an Explanation Writing about: "IF YOU COULD CHANGE ONE THING ABOUT OUR SCHOOL WHAT WOULD IT BE?" 

We all thought of some things and many of us had some really great ideas but we had to choose just ONE thing, so we picked one thing we thought of and started writing about it. I was still thinking of what to do but to be very honest, I didn't want to change a thing about my school, as a student that has been here since yr 0. I loved it the way it was everything was ok. Hope You Enjoy My Writing. :)

Changing GTS

Title:

IF YOU COULD CHANGE ONE THING ABOUT OUR SCHOOL WHAT WOULD IT BE?

Introduction:

Firstly If I could change one thing about Glen Taylor School it would be changing the play area for
the senior syndicate around
our school like the netball court, park etc

Reason 2:

I know some students think it’s boring so why not upgrade it? Upgrade it into something more
cooler and also safer like make the playground because its old and make it more usable so like
put swings, a flying fox,monkey bars,
and also a slide to make it more steeper just to make the students feel chills going down their
backs while they are sliding down.

Reason 3:

Also for the students can have fun during lunch time/morning tea and so they don’t get hurt or bored.
But most importantly is we should be more grateful for what we have right now at our school because
there no other schools that have a swimming pool, basketball court or even a park all they have is a field
or even worse!.

This is the ONE thing i would change about GTS (Glen Taylor School).