You Get Stuck In An Elevator With....Writing

You Get Stuck In An Elevator WIth…..The Most 2 Annoying People In The World

Characters: Me (Miracle), Tiria, Lesieli, Darius, David, Lucky

Intro:Once again at the most famous but boring hotels ever “Heartland Hotel” it wasn’t that boring because my friends were there, tiria and Lesieli are the bestest friends ever, on the other hand, there are three most annoying boys that worked there, their names were David, Lucky, and Darius but out of all of them the most annoying one was Darius, David.

Build Up: When I was on my shift  David and lucky worked on the same shift as me and tiria. Tiria and I got called up to a room to clean but unfortunately, Darius and David were in the elevator too, I and tiria got confused why they were in there.

Problem: But then suddenly the elevator stopped and the lights went out it was so loud it sounded like BAM!!! we all got shocked and scared. When everything happened I was thinking why did I get stuck in the elevator with the most two annoying people why did it had to be those two then I said out loud “Why why god why” then they all got confused then tiria said “What do you mean miracle” I suddenly said “Oops I said that out to loud nvm “ when I got stucked on the elevator with those to knuckle heads and tiria I thought to myself I’m going to differently die alone and I even said that out loud too Everyone said “Yep you are” I thought that they were joking but Tiria said “You actually are”

Resolution:When the elevator stopped I was looking around seeing if there was any way out I had to find a way out quick while I was looking around I thought of how Lesieli and Lucky was doing and hoping where we are because their shift is starting when I was thinking I saw lights coming back on I was thinking that might be them helping us.

But suddenly it wasn’t them tiria had a flashlight because the elevator was dark and she forgot that she had one. We all were talking for hours and hours when we all were talking tiria stayed quite maybe because she was tired or something, I saw everyone getting tired so I told then go sleep then they all said ok they were falling asleep I was on guard just in case anyone comes It was getting late I thought it would be ok for me to go sleep so I did.

End:*Everyone Sleeping* I woke up and saw the time 10:00pm I heard footsteps coming so I woke up everyone I told them what I heard, OMG I am so blind I just saw a door on the top to go on the top of the elevator everyone was so frustrated at me I was like “I’m Sorry” they everyone else said “No time for apologies let get out of here” SO we did Tiria saw ladder going up to a floor we all climbed  it.

Atlast we were free everyone rushed down stairs to see if anyone is here someone was there it was lesieli and Lucky we were all happy to see them mostly me and tiria was happy me darius david and tiria was so hungry the first question we asked them “Can we go get something to eat” to lucky and that they were the goodest friend I ever had they already brought food because they thought that me and the rest was still here we were but I told them the full story while we were eating after that me and the rest was also tired we were all too tired to drive we were scared that we might fall asleep on the road so that why we asked lesieli to drive us to our house.

During Term 2 Miss Tupou Shared A Document Of Choices Of Narrative Starts Off Sentences Out Off All Of Them I Picked (You Get Stuck In An Elevator With), Why I Chose This One Was I Had A Good Idea Of What I'm Going To Add To This Start Of And I Think It Turned Out Great. After Writing We Had A Sharing Circle We Only Shared Our Intros Because Some Of Them Are To Long Like Mine After Sharing In Our Circle. I Hope You Enjoy Reading Because I Enjoyed Writing This Story.