Similies

Today task is just writing 4 simple similes. 

The Mountain Pass

The Mountain Pass is a quick write writing Rm 11 always has quick write every Monday morning it now gonna be a Monday morning thing now :). f you don;t know what a quick write is...well you have to write whatever you teacher tells you to write about or shows a picture and that what you going to write about, quick write any type of writing you can do poem etc. Well I hope you enjoy my writing

The Mountain Pass

Time went by and I didn’t even notice that weeks or months just passed through the days as if there was no time at all. Walking past trees and jagged hills had made my eyesight obnoxious. I didn’t even know where I was going. My mind was going through all crazy and complicated pains. I was going INSANE!! My body was hesitating to keep going, my stomach was starving and every slight movement made a step closer to freezing to death. Nothing in my body was communicating with me.

Darkness was appearing in front of my eyes so I decided, since my body is not going to work with me I might as well sleep it off, so I did.

The Next Day I woke up, sore and in a lot of  pain. My back started hurting but it didn't hold back. All of a sudden, I tripped on a rock and hit myself. I fell unconscious. When I woke, I saw stairs in the near distance, between a tall and humongous hills. I smelt a strange scent from a distance.

Something caught my attention. I saw a sign reading “WARNING: DON’T GO FORWARD, DANGER AHEAD”. My mind was full of questions, “should I go ahead”, “ No, I shouldn't, there’s a sign right there saying “Danger”. But there was something about that strange scent that was calling me to go ahead....

TO BE CONTINUED!!

Plural/Writing

Plural/Writing

Today for writing we are doing a plural poster,Y-IES for my poster I did the rule for plurals and some words to let you know well here is my poster.Hope you like it.

My Writing

Today for writing we are doing descriptive writing and by our writing we had to use the five senses and pick a picture by once upon a picture I chose this picture because it was fun and I had heaps of ideas.Here is my story hope you enjoy.

My fire poster

This is my fire poster in class we did what fire means to me I hope you like it and now it is our new values.

Cook island languge week

This week I have been doing a Cook Island language for my class hope you like it.

This is me poem

Kiwi can This is me

At kiwi can we did this is me poem well this is my poem all about me.

This is me

I am Miracle

I wonder what my future is going to be like.

I see my parents.

I want to become a netball player.

I hear the crowds cheering for me.

I am Miracle

I pretend that I am cool but not.

I feel really proud to be me.

I touch the clouds when I’m lying down.

I worry about my parents.

I cry about when one of my family member has died.

I am Miracle

I understand my parents.

I say that we are all good people.

I dream about every day I would fly and visit my sister.

I try really hard on my sports.

I hope I could be really fun with other people.

I am Miracle.